30 Wishes in Stones

We started our Writer's Workshop this week with wishing stones I brought back from Hornby Island. After some brainstorming and revising, each student contributed their favourite lines to this collaborative poem. Can you see it, hear it, and feel it? Which lines are yours?

30 Wishes in Stone by Division 1

Imagine a wishing stone
Footsteps on a pebble road
The pitter patter of rain hitting the shingles of a house
A frozen marble, smooth and round with an icy top layer
Like a jelly bean with a mouth
Or an egg about to crack.
The clack of a pot hitting the table
like lightning bolts striking across the midnight sky.

My stone sounds like a metronome
Like a beautiful solar system with shooting stars and lots of light.
Like a gorgeous circle around a delightful sun
Like a grey skull with a white golden strip that cascades from the ear to the back of the neck, sparkling in the sunlight.
Or a night sky with lightning

Imagine a wishing stone
With pale grey speckles dotting the surface
Like the first snowfall on Christmas Eve
A map with many roads going in different directions
Like a gray and white snakehead
A wet dog that just came out of the lake.
A starry sky that has been captured in stone.

Imagine a wishing stone
Like a pink jelly bean
Or a racetrack
Like rumbling thunder over the mountains, far and distant, yet crying out to be heard.
Like an old pop can covered in spider’s strings
A knock on an aluminum door
A planet in space with rings of dust and meteors circling it
A galaxy swirling
Shaped like an internal organ.

Imagine a wishing stone
that feels cold and smooth like ice on the brink of cracking
That sounds like wood being sawn in half
Like smooth petrified oak
Like someone hammering a nail
My stone looks like a warped helmet
Looks like it has a green glow
And smells like it has been dropped from a pelican’s veiny feet
Into a salty, rough, waterfall.

Imagine our stones
Thirty wishes whispering in palms.


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